Originally posted by Sirius B
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I like it a lot. There's a lot of metaphorical cross-links in that story, you know, meaning. IMO, that's the hook for an audience to be able to participate in a story as it relates to the events in their own lives. For example, the Freudian ID, Ego, and Super Ego....is reflected in the time aspect of past/present/future.....the development of the psyche, through the stages of infancy, adolescence, and adulthood. It's like a mirror (perhaps the metaphor). The death/life rules....are fascinating.....
I wrote a story (needs further work) called "Willy's Review" about an art critic who has lost his enthusiasm for his life. Apathy has set in.....It coincides with Sergei Rachmaninoff's depression and apathy (after his first symphony was not well received). But as the story unfolds their paths come together at the climax where Willy attends the premier Rachmaninoff's: Piano Concerto no.2 op. 18. in Moscow, Russia.
After Willy attends he finds his zest for life once again and writes and submits his review and attends a dinner at the composer's house but......as the story ends he is killed and it is revealed that Willy.....is a house fly. Then the death scene takes Willy into the spirit world and into "heaven" with a marvelous description of the experience of death....which ends with Willy realizing that he is now a sphere...among other spheres....that are reflecting each other in color and vibration. Then the story ends with Willy hearing the sound of laughing children.
Anyway...I like your ideas a lot....Cheers.
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